Review: Butcher’s Moon, Part 3


This hatred is one side of the rather equivocal attitude the Greek mythical tradition has toward the figure of the wolf.  On the one hand, the wolf, as Richard Buxton suggests, “stands for one who by his behavior has set himself beyond humanity.”  This is particularly true of the “lone wolf,” a figure isolated from human and lupine community alike.  Connected to this, of course, is the idea, embodied by Odysseus’s grandfather, of cunning criminality.  In Pythian 2, Pindar emphasizes this cunning in a passage that resonates deeply with the conception of justice for which Polemarchus advocates: “May I love my friend: but against my enemy I shall make a secret attack, like a wolf, treading now here now there on my crooked paths.”  This dimension of the lupine character is what drives Polemarchus to recognize the limits of his own position.  On the the other hand, however, because of its cooperative nature, its social life together with others in a pack, and its practices of collaborative hunting and of the equitable sharing of quarry, the wolf also stood in the Greek mythological tradition as a symbol of community and even as an analogue for human social life.

From Plato’s Animals, by Jeremy Bell and Michael Naas

Richard Stark has created a large reputation (including screen credits) with his novels about Parker, the professional thief and killer-if-necessary.  And he does these books very well, even if a few in the series strain credulity.  One such was “Slayground” (1971), in which Parker takes on a whole police force in an amusement park shootout and makes his getaway.

But things improve in the latest Parker, BUTCHER’S MOON (Random House, $4.95).  It has a tie-in with “Slayground”: in the earlier book, Parker had left some money hidden in the amusement park.  In “Butcher’s Moon” he goes back to retrieve it after a job has gone sour.  To get the money back the hero must take on a Mafia gang, a crooked cop, and, in addition, exact his own revenge.  So he gets a few recruits, robs the mob blind, and finally wipes out all the bad guys.

Parker the super-tough, Parker the super-suspicious, Parker the super-lethal, Parker the super-ingenious.  So it’s all nonsense.  But what is not nonsense is Stark’s admirably controlled writing–as tough and spare as Parker himself is.  Stark deals only with the criminal subculture.  His is an unsentimental world and a fatalistic one.  Life means absolutely nothing.  Men are governed only by greed, power, or lust.  There is no such thing as honesty, and everybody, everything, is to be distrusted.  Parker himself is a curiously vague figure.  Stark is not much on characterization.  But the world in which Parker prowls is made very real thanks to Stark’s considerable gifts as a writer and storyteller.

Curiously, Parker is not an anti-hero.  He is bigger than life; nobody was ever like him, or ever will be.

Newgate Callendar (aka Harold C. Schonberg), Criminals at Large, New York Times Book Review, 9/15/74

Calesian moved over to the window, looked out at the dark city under the moonless sky.  The spotted streetlights, aping the stars, emphasized the darkness rather than cutting it.  Calesian sensed Parker out there somewhere, scurrying in the dark with his army.

He looked up at the sky.  Why the hell wasn’t there a moon, for Christ’s sake?  The air would be hot just the other side of the window glass, but the air conditioning was on in here, and he shivered slightly from the coolness of it.  And the unrelieved darkness.  A hell of a night to die, he thought.

That Times review up above is a true rarity, brief though it be (that’s the full text; the rest is devoted to other books).  Other than Westlake’s longtime supporter Anthony Boucher, few Times critics ever paid much attention to him until much later, when he was seen as more of a senior statesman of the comic caper, or whatever.   When he got out of his appointed niche, as in Up Your Banners, the Times could get downright savage.

This piece is actually from the very book review section that Westlake had the protagonist of Adios Scheherazade lament he could never get into with his pathetic pornos (even though they were still showing pictures of bare-breasted African women), and measured as its praise might be, I’d assume Westlake savored the small symbolic victory. Made it ma, top of the world!

‘Newgate Callendar’ was not primarily known as a literary critic–he was just kibbitzing here–doing a minor column for the book review section called Criminals at Large, a brief semi-regular overview of recent crime/suspense novels.  He’d previously reviewed two of the earlier Random House Parkers there (none of the paperbacks).  His regular gig was music critic, for which he won a Pulitzer in 1971.

He makes a few regrettable errors here (Parker is not shooting it out with ‘a whole police force’ in Slayground), but he gave Stark and Westlake both a number of good reviews over the years.  I would assume he knew they were one and the same when he wrote this, being no stranger to pseudonyms himself, but it’s hard to tell, isn’t it?

“So it’s all nonsense.”  Because it couldn’t happen that way in reality?  Because the characters are bigger than life?  Because it’s full of grand flourishes, overblown bloody denouements?  So by that standard, Mr. Callendar, wouldn’t pretty much every opera you ever reviewed be far worse nonsense?   Ah well, let it lie.   He had it right about how good a writer Richard Stark was.  About nobody ever being like Parker in reality–I’d agree–if we’re talking human beings.  Are we, necessarily?

I was hoping to unearth some serious in-depth critiques of Butcher’s Moon from around the time it was published, and to that end, I obtained an old copy of The Armchair Detective (Volume 7, #4), ‘A Quarterly Journal Devoted to the Appreciation of Mystery, Detective, and Suspense Fiction.’  An online search indicated I might find an article on the book there.  That’s some scary search engine, because what it was referring to was two nigh-microscopic missives; one from the letters page–fan mail from none other than Joe Gores, just starting to make a name for himself in the genre, and who had, of course, just recently published a novel that was a planned cross-over with Plunder Squad.

A hell of a fine issue of TAD this time, by the way, with the Westlake (Coe), de la Torre, and Hammett pieces well worth the price of admission just by themselves.  Have you seen the latest Westlake/Stark, by the way, just out from Random House?  Butcher’s Moon, at 300 plus pages?  Just a fantastic boomer of a book, one I think must claim very serious consideration for this year’s Edgar.  Thick, meaty, and not an ounce of fat on it.  To my mind, as close to a modern Red Harvest as we are likely to get.

Heartfelt and perceptive, but hardly an objective scholarly third party source, nor was a capsule review by TAD‘s dedicated and super-knowledgeable editor, Allen J. Hubin, about as long as Gores’ letter, and even more fanboy-esque.  The gist of it is ‘great fun, nothing to be taken seriously.’   And in case you were wondering, Butcher’s Moon wasn’t even nominated for an Edgar, a distinction it shares with everything else that ever appeared under the name Richard Stark.

In point of fact, nothing that happens in Butcher’s Moon is a whit less likely than a short stout balding man working for a large soulless private detective agency taking it upon himself to clean up a corrupt violent city by turning two criminal factions against each other with near-diabolic Machiavellian prowess, then walking away with nary a scratch on him to his next thrilling adventure.  Nothing against Hammett, I’m just saying.  ‘Bigger than life’ is pretty much the wheelhouse for the entire mystery/crime/suspense genre.   Always has been.

Whatever it is makes a piece of fiction worthy of significant long-term scrutiny–or simply throwaway entertainment, which has its place in the scheme of things, but is destined to be forgotten over time–it isn’t whether or not it could happen in real life, anymore than we judge a painting by how perfectly it mirrors its model.  Realism is just one tool in the kit.  It’s how effectively you wield the tools you choose for the job that counts.   Not whether people believe the story in retrospect, but whether they’re caught up in it when they’re experiencing it, and whether it has some unique and compelling perception to impart, above and beyond the spinning of a good yarn–but never instead of that. The yarn comes first, or what’s the point?  You could just write a pedantic long-winded essay to get your insights across.  I do, all the time.  Back to the synopsis.

So Parker is no longer merely concerned with getting his 73 thousand dollars from the Tyler mob, which at this time they have no intention of giving him anyway.  They have enraged him on some primal level by sending him Grofield’s severed finger in a box, and telling him they’ll keep cutting things off Grofield until Parker agrees to come talk to them, at which time of course he’ll be killed, as will Grofield, because they’ve got to make him the fall guy for Lozini’s murder by Calesian, who is now taking control of the organization.

They’re saying they’ll give him the money, Grofield, and an ambulance to take Grofield away in, and it’s hard to say whether they believe Parker is stupid enough to buy this, but even pretending they think he’s that stupid is pretty damned insulting.

If they had not sent him the finger, Grofield’s fate would be none of his business, and he’d have kept focusing on the money.  But the mix of sadism and duplicity in this ultimatum has brought out the inner wolf, to an extent we’ve never seen before.  He does not merely wish to kill the people directly responsible–his intent now is to decapitate the syndicate in Tyler, kill everyone who had any connection to this ‘peace offering.’   Not simply one or two individuals, but the organization itself needs to die for the disquiet in his mind to be quelled.

And, lest we forget, he still needs the money, which he knows now he’s going to have to take by force, from a large number of armed men.  And for that he needs a crew.  So drawing upon his long years of heisting, a file of exceptionally capable fellow pros he’s compiled in his head since before we first met him, he persuades eleven first-rate heisters to come to Tyler on short notice, with the promise that rich pickings await.  His reputation as a planner is all the inducement they need.  If Parker says there’s loot to be had, they believe it.

These men don’t work for anybody but themselves–they’re all hardcore independents like him.  But they have all proven to Parker that they can work with others of their kind as a disciplined unit, and there’s a toughness to them, a self-sufficiency, that no midwest mafiosi can match.   They are the closest human analog he’ll ever find to an actual wolf pack.  Though getting them to agree to what he has in mind will be more like herding cats.

The group assembled in some vacationing couple’s vacant apartment, Parker brings out his captive, Frankie Faran, who has given Parker all the intel he needs to rob the Tyler outfit down to their skivvies in one night.  Faran’s will has broken down entirely–he mechanically answers all the questions they ask him.   They’re left in little doubt that they can grab a lot of money–and because nobody steals from mobsters, and mobsters can’t call the cops in to defend illegal earnings, they’ll meet token resistance, if any at all.

Normally they’d need to finance a job, work out a plan, assign tasks–there’d be financial as well as physical risk, an investment of time and resources–but that’s all been attended to prior to their arrival–Parker has the jobs all mapped out.  He’s even stolen a small arsenal of guns they can use and throw away, none of which could ever be traced to them.  They’ll be leaving town the next day, so they can just steal any cars or other equipment they need.  It’s a very tempting proposition, but here’s the kicker–everything they take they can split eleven ways.  Parker wants none of it.   What the….?

He shows them the finger.  Explains where it came from.  Most of them don’t know Grofield at all, some (like Wycza) do.  They don’t like it, turns their stomachs a bit, but they still don’t get what he’s driving at.

And here may be my favorite passage in the entire series–where Westlake finally makes Parker explain himself–admit what he’d only privately admitted in The Seventh–that sometimes he does things that don’t make sense on purely pragmatic terms, because he can’t do anything else.   Because sometimes a wolf’s gotta do what a wolf’s gotta do.  But what he learned from that experience, perhaps, is that it’s best to have everybody in the crew on the same page.  And to be honest, with your partners and yourself, about what you’re really after.

“I want Grofield back,” Parker said, “and I want my money.  And I want those people dead.”

Hurley gestured, wanting more.  He said, “So?”

“So I set you people up with scores, you go do them, you’ve got good money you wouldn’t have had.  You’ll all be finished, back here, by when?  Three, four in the morning?

Most of them shrugged in agreement.  Hurley bobbed his head, saying, “Probably.  Then what?”

“Then you come with me,” Parker said.  “The twelve of us hit Buenadella’s house and get Grofield out of there.  And if they moved him somewhere, we find out where and go hit that place.”  He checked off names on his fingers, saying  “And we make them dead.  Buenadella.  Calesian.  Dulare.”

His intensity had startled them a little.  Nobody said anything until Handy McKay, speaking very quietly, said “That’s not like you.”

What kind of shit was this?  Parker had expected a back-up from Handy, not questions.  He said, “What’s not like me?”

“A couple things,” Handy said.  “For one, to go to all this trouble for somebody else.  Grofield, me, anybody.  We all of us here know we got to take care of ourselves, we’re not the Travelers Aid Society.  You, too.  And the same with Grofield.  What happens to him is up to him.”

“Not when they send him to me piece by piece,” Parker said.  “If they kill him, that’s one thing.  If they turn him over to the law, get him sent up, that’s his lookout.  But these bastards rang me in on it.”

Handy spread his hands, letting that point go.  “The other thing,” he said, “is revenge.   I’ve never seen you do anything but play the hand you were dealt.  Now all of a sudden you want a bunch of people dead.”

Parker got to his feet.  He’d been patient a long time, he’d explained things over and over, and now he was getting itchy.  Enough was enough.  “I don’t care,” he said.  “I don’t care if it’s like me or not.  These people nailed my foot to the floor, I’m going around in circles, I’m not getting anywhere.  When was it like me to take lumps and just walk away?  I’d like to burn this city to the ground, I’d like to empty it right down to the basements.  And I don’t want to talk about it anymore, I want to do it.  You’re in, Handy, or you’re out.  I told you the setup, I told you what I want, I told you what you’ll get for it.  Give me a yes or a no.”

Tom Hurley said, “What’s the goddam rush?  We got over an hour before we can hit any of these things.”

Stan Devers, getting to his feet, said, “Just time enough for a nap.  I’m in, Parker.”   He turned to Wycza, beside him.  “Dan?”

Wycza wasn’t quite ready to be pushed.  He frowned up at Devers, frowned across the room at Parker, seemed on the verge of telling everybody to go drop dead, and then abruptly shrugged and said, “Sure, what the hell.  I like a little boom-boom sometimes.”

Handy said, “Parker, I was never anything but in, you know that.”

Ed Mackey said, “Shit, we’re all in.  I know Grofield, he’s a pleasant guy, we don’t want anybody out there dismantling him.”

Mike Carlow, the driver, who hadn’t had anything at all to say up till now, said, “I don’t know this guy Grofield from a dune buggy.  In fact, I don’t even know any of you people.  But I know Parker, and I’m in.”

They were all in.  Parker, looking from face to face, saw that none of them was even thinking of bowing out.  Some of the tension eased out of Parker’s shoulders and back.  “All right,” he said.  “All right.”

As inspirational locker-room speeches go, it’s a bit bloody-minded, but the objective is the same–each man has individual goals–Parker needs them to work as a group.  Most of them have, in the past, been beneficiaries of his thorough-going professionalism–Devers got his start in ‘the profession’ through Parker, who sent him to Handy for training.  Handy owes Parker his life, several times over–he never thought that was because Parker had any special feeling for him, but he himself has always clearly seen Parker as a friend.  Carlow got out of jail and found out Parker had not only managed to turn that soured coin heist into a paying proposition, he’d saved Carlow’s share for him.  Because that’s what one professional does for another.   The Travelers Aid Society they ain’t, but membership does have its privileges.

So under the influence of Parker’s most atypical burst of eloquence, this motley group of misfits becomes an army, unified by the need to score–but also their respect for this man who embodies the spirit of their illegal enterprise better than anyone else.  There’s more than a little wolf in each of them–but he’s all wolf.  And they’re his pack now.  Until the job is done.

Westlake wrote this scene, I surmise, because he knew longtime readers would have problems with this seeming face-turn–as he himself might have had–after all, he repeatedly dismissed The Jugger, one of his best books, because he felt he hadn’t provided enough of an explanation for why Parker would respond to Joe Sheer’s pathetic plea for help.  But here I think he felt he had pulled it off–yes, it seems like Parker wants to help Grofield, is playing the noble hero, but is that really what’s going on?

Each of us can make up our own minds, reading these books, what feelings, if any, Parker has for the men he works with.  Perhaps none at all.  But they are, for all that, the men he works with.  And Parker’s work is who he is, what he is, all he is.  It’s his identity.  Without it, he’s nothing.  Which means without them, he’s nothing.  He’s not a pickpocket or a mugger.  He’s a heister.  Heisters work in strings, just like wolves hunt in packs.   That’s what made him turn to this life in the first place–it’s the closest thing he could find in this insane human world into which he was mistakenly born to the instinctive template in his head.

He needs Grofield, the money, and the Tyler ganglords dead.  Why?  Because in sending him that finger, and lying to him about the money and the ambulance, they reminded him, yet again, of that irrational cruelty in humankind that has always made his brain itch.  They reminded him he is an alien in this world, that he will never belong here, among these naked apes.

It’s not to save Grofield that he does this, but to make their lie the truth.  They said he would get Grofield, the money, and an ambulance, so he will get Grofield, the money, and an ambulance.  And they will die for promising what they had no intention of delivering, and for having the presumption to include him in their madness with that finger.  He isn’t like them.   He’s something else.  Something they should have left alone.

One more thing, and I know I’m getting offtrack here, but bear with me–I had the privilege, about a year back, to attend a gathering of Donald Westlake’s closest friends and colleagues, as well as his wife Abby, and I saw the way they spoke about him.  I heard the note of loss in their voices.  They were not mourning the loss of a great writer.  They were still feeling the loss of a once-in-a-lifetime friend, a gap in their lives that would never be filled.  I’ve seen this in what people who knew him wrote about him after his death.   They loved him.  Can anyone doubt he returned the feeling?  When we see Rosie refer ironically to ‘The loyalty of friendship’, in The Hunter, we should understand that loyalty–to one’s friends as well as oneself–meant more to him than anything.  He just knows that it has its limits.  A flawed yet vital shelter from the harsh winds of an indifferent cosmos.

Much as Richard Stark may represent a side of Westlake that wants to feel less, to be left alone to do his work, to not give a damn about anyone or anything, because giving a damn hurts so damn much, he did nonetheless give a damn.  About lots of things, lots of people.  And that can’t help but bleed its way into the Stark books, and therefore into their central protagonist.  The moral of those books was never “This is how things should be,” but “This is how things are, so how do we live with it and still remain ourselves?”

Regardless of what Mr. Newgate Callendar may have thought ‘the real world’ to be like, let’s be frank–it’s not a nice place.  Men are mainly governed by greed, power, and lust (women too, sorry girls).  True honesty is the rarest of commodities, people you can fully trust even rarer.  We cling to family and friendships so fiercely, because we all know it’s true.  It’s not just a convention of what we sometimes call noir fiction–noir is merely a stylized expressionistic take on everyday human life, which is why it’s endured as a literary form, and has had such a broad and pervasive influence across all mediums.   We all walk down mean streets sometimes.  Some of them a lot meaner than others.   Noir is a romanticized form of realism, and nobody ever understood this better than that wounded romantic, Richard Stark.

But when I come down from this flight of fancy, I can think of one other, much more mundane reason for Parker behaving this way–unless Westlake wrote this book quite a good long while before it was published, he would have written it after he’d seen John Flynn’s The Outfit, based rather loosely on the third Parker novel that serves, you might say, as the foundation of this much more ambitious narrative.

That movie’s version of Parker, played by Robert Duvall, refuses to leave that movie’s version of Handy McKay, played by Joe Don Baker, when the latter is badly wounded, and tells ‘Macklin’ to leave him.   Macklin puts on an EMT’s white jacket, and commandeers an ambulance to get him and his comrade away from the scene of the final gun battle.   Like at least half that movie, Flynn did not get that idea from the book he was adapting.  There’s an ambulance used for criminal purposes in The Seventh, which had already been turned into a movie, which Flynn presumably saw, so maybe that was the inspiration.

Westlake liked Flynn’s movie (more than I do), and would have enjoyed the irony of two killers escaping a scene of mayhem in an ambulance under the guise of medic and patient.  So assuming Flynn didn’t somehow get the idea from Westlake (who didn’t work on that film at all, not even as a consultant), I’d say that Westlake got the idea of the ambulance from Flynn’s movie, and improved and elaborated upon it to an exponential degree, transforming a mere throwaway gag into a wry thematic statement.

You’d think somebody would have asked him about that sometime, but unless there’s an interview somewhere I’ve missed, I guess we’ll never know for sure.   And this is what comes of not taking books like this seriously while their authors are still alive.  I better finish the synopsis before this gets completely out of hand.

Parker’s friends go out and do their heists, all of which go off without a hitch, and this is by far the most enjoyable part of the book.   Characters we’ve loved from earlier books, who have never met before in many cases, sizing each other up, working together beautifully, exchanging professional tips and iconoclastic points of view while doing their jobs, and honestly–Newgate Callendar may have been a fantastic music critic, but for him to say “Stark is not much for characterization” is just staggeringly unforgivably wrong.  Stark can tell you more about a character with one paragraph than most writers could with a trilogy.  But see, it’s the kind of characterization you normally find in the best short stories, not in novels.  Thumbnail portraits.  Callendar is applying the wrong standards here, because to him this is just light entertainment he reads to get away from himself.  Which is fine, but it blinds him to all the other things it can be.

Dan Wycza in particular gets to shine.  True, Parker said he was dead, back in The Rare Coin Score, but that doesn’t really need any explaining, since there’s no reason to think Parker witnessed his reputed demise.  In his world, false rumors must abound, and how could he check on them?  Westlake must have felt that Stark had disposed of Dan too hastily, too peremptorily, and issued a reprieve–we’ll have reason to be glad of that in future books.

At one point, Wycza, Stan Devers, and Mike Carlow are going to grab drug money from a courier and his two menacing bodyguards–named Trask and Slade, a wink to Westlake’s biggest hit of the 60’s, The Fugitive Pigeon.  Devers figures they just have to wound one of them, and the others will give up–no need to kill them.  Stan’s a good-natured kid.  Wycza and Devers, the seasoned veterans, have the bodyguards down as hard cases, and the courier as a rabbit–they’ll figure if they lose the money they’re dead no matter what, so they’ll fight, or run.  But they give Devers a chance to test his theory.  The theory fails to pan out, and they go with Plan B–three dead men.  Another life lesson for Stan.

Meanwhile, Wiss and Elkins grab a stockbroker and his wife from their bed–the cleanest job of the night, and the most profitable.  The stockbroker’s son got into trouble with the law a while back, and Lozini fixed it for him.  In exchange, the stockbroker had to keep money he knew was dirty in his office safe.   The stockbroker’s humiliation outweighs his fear–he knew all along he was compromising his integrity, but what else could he do?

He weeps brokenly on the street, after Wiss and Elkins leave with the loot, swearing he’ll never do anything for Lozini and his friends again.   He doesn’t know that’s not ever going to be an issue again, after tonight.  Free at last.  Unburdened of his guilt–and one hundred and forty six thousand smackers, so good thing there’s not going to be anybody left to complain.

I detect more than a whiff of O. Henry in this vignette–and more than a hint of Westlake’s own abiding guilt over the pain he put his father through, when he got in trouble with the law, many years before, and dad had to pull strings to get him off the hook.  One of those stories from Westlake’s past that keeps popping up in his fiction, different each time, but always the same underneath. A father now himself, he knows that no matter how high a value you place on your honor, your most deeply-held values, your obligations to your children will make you sell yourself on the cheap, time and again.   A much darker take on this story will appear in a much later novel, that I think may have helped trigger the resurrection of Richard Stark, but we can worry about that later.

Most of these jobs, in one way or another, refer back to earlier jobs Parker has done–for example, Handy and Ducasse take over the office of a private security firm, that handles alarm systems for the Tyler mob.  That’s clearly a reference to Parker & Co. taking over Copper Canyon in The Score.  Not mere nostalgic references, what we’re seeing here is that Parker has been learning all the time we’ve known him, improving his craft, making professional connections, and becoming better, in his own way, at working with other people, understanding them.   He’s not such a lone wolf anymore.  He couldn’t afford to be, if he wanted to stay solvent, free, and breathing.

I think this is one reason the book does not refer to The Seventh and The Sour Lemon Score–both about jobs that went completely wrong, where Parker’s crew ended up dead, where he either didn’t work well with his colleagues, or he was off on his own most of the time, and if he got his cut, as in The Seventh, it was mainly by dint of his strange luck.   That’s not what this book is about.  This book is about teamwork.   In some ways, we may prefer to see Parker left to his own dark devices, the rugged individualist on a lonely quest, but in all but those two books (and The Hunter, which Westlake couldn’t very well avoid mentioning here), he actually works very well with others.  As long as they work well with him.

They get back to the apartment, pockets loaded with cash–“Son of a blue bitch, boys, that’s a quarter million dollars”, Mackey says quietly.  More than that, actually–and in today’s terms, it’s almost a million and a half, for one night’s work.  Split eleven ways, each man gets a bit over 25k.  The army has its wages.  Time to start the war.

Elsewhere, Calesian has already lost the power he so briefly grasped at–as word has trickled in about all the syndicate businesses Parker’s friends have hit, it’s all too obvious that his plan to either lure Parker in for the killing or scare him away has backfired in spectacular fashion.  He’s being ignored now, and Dulare, who was content to let somebody else steer the ship, has taken the wheel, to try and keep it off the rocks.

They’ve holed up at Buenadella’s house, waiting out the moonless night, with a lot of men and guns, Grofield lying unconscious upstairs.   Even though Calesian assumes they’ll kill Parker eventually, he knows it’ll be too late for him.  His moment is gone.  He still doesn’t understand just how badly he screwed up, but somebody there will try to explain it to him.  Somebody we have to briefly look at, and now I’m thinking I should have made this a four-parter after all.  There’s just too damn much material in this book.

The only high-ranking member of the Tyler outfit who isn’t present is Frank Schroder, but he’s sent a deputy in his place–guy named Quittner, “a cold bastard, tall and skinny and pallid as death.”  That’s a real name that people have, but I don’t think it was just picked at random out of the phone book.

It’s never stated out loud, but it comes out in small subtle ways.  Quittner is the only one who understands Parker, who knows what they’re up against.  He knows Parker wouldn’t be coming after them if not for the finger–“He wasn’t the right man for that.”   He knows Parker will not be content to steal from them while they cower in the house–“He’ll come for his friend,” he predicts quietly.  How can he know all this?  Because he’s what Parker would have been if Parker had compromised with the world he was born into, gone to work for someone else, given up his freedom.  He’s a failed Parker.   He quit on himself.

And underlying this is Westlake’s fear of what he might have become, if he had given in to the temptation to seek a safe regular job, instead of choosing the much more difficult and insecure path he did.  Stark is the fullest expression of the romantic in him, the part that refuses to compromise, at least on the big stuff. We all have to compromise sometimes; even real wolves do, but Stark is a defiant rejection of that fact–and at the same time, paradoxically, a tacit concession to it.

Quittner is a capable man, feared and respected by others in the organization, but Calesian thinks to himself that it’s unlikely he’ll ever try to take control.  Because somehow it’s not in his nature to be a boss, but it wasn’t in his nature to be an underling either, and this means that dangerous as he is, Quittner is to Parker as a mangy wolf in a cage is to a free-roaming alpha with a pack behind him.  In fact, his physical description is rather akin to that of Raven, the bitter beaten-down hired assassin of Graham Greene’s A Gun For Sale, which I believe partly inspired The Hunter–only no harelip.  Westlake wouldn’t be that obvious.

Quittner might as well be named Cassandra–there’s at least forty armed men in the house, they’re watching all the windows and doors, there’s no way Parker’s crew can come after them without getting cut down.  Not to mention there’s a state police surveillance van parked out front.  There’s no moon, but there’s artificial light–the modern equivalent of fire, man’s first real weapon against the beasts of the night.  And then the lights go out.

Parker has left nothing to chance.  He’s had Wiss and Elkins take out a power substation, causing the part of the city Buenadella’s house is in to be plunged into blackness.  Devers has cut the phone wires.  Hurley and Mackey have disarmed and tied up the cops in the surveillance van.   And what follows makes John Carpenter’s Assault on Precinct 13 look like–um–let me think–the crappy remake of that movie?

The three drivers, Webb, Carlow, and Dalesia park their cars on the front lawn, their headlights on bright, so that Parker and his men coming in the back will be able to see the mobsters outlined in the glare, the drivers’ guns preventing anyone from escaping out the front, or shooting out the headlights.   It’s a perfect trap, and it negates the advantage of numbers.  Confused and disheartened, the Tyler mob disintegrates, cut down one after the other, until the last few, including Dulare and Quittner, are holed up in a room, figuring that the cops have to show up soon, and Parker’s men will have to run for it.  Then Handy McKay rolls a bomb into the room.

There’s even a little nod to the good old Stark Rewind–we see a scene from Buenadella’s POV–he’s about to kill Grofield in his bed, out of pure pique–then he sees Parker pointing a gun at him–“Goodbye, Buenadella.”    Then the same scene from Parker’s POV, ending with the same two words.  Goodbye, Tyler mob.

Sure, Schroder is still alive, and presumably in charge now, but of what?  Most of their men are dead.  Their finances were already stretched thin from backing both mayoral candidates.  The state and federal law will come hard at them in the wake of all the chaos, and they’ve lost Calesian, their number one mole in the Tyler police force.  We never find out who gets elected mayor (because Stark doesn’t give a damn), but there’s no money to grease the wheels with, and it’s unlikely they could control either man now.  Their businesses have been ruined.  The national organization will offer no help.   There’ll still be crime, and corruption, and the men smart enough to cut and run were allowed to live, but the Tyler mob, as Parker knew it, is dead.

And surprisingly, Grofield is still alive.  Score one for Westlake/Vishnu–but Stark/Shiva needed a sacrifice–Ducasse caught a bullet.  Their only casualty.   Well, more loot for everyone else.  Speaking of loot, they break into Buenadella’s safe–Handy hands the money to Parker in a bag–says there’s just over fifty-eight thousand.  “Not enough,” Parker says.  He was owed seventy-three.  In the ruins of the house, with dead men lying all around him, he shrugs and says “I’ll settle.” See?  Everybody compromises.  You can let the small stuff go and still be yourself.

So did I mention they stole an ambulance beforehand?  Devers has put on a white jacket, and for no reason at all but good fellowship, offers to help Parker take Grofield home.  We can imagine the look on Mary’s face when they get back to that community theater in Indiana.  Maybe the 29k they hand her–Grofield’s share–will soften her expression slightly.   Maybe she lays down the law once Grofield is up and walking again–no more heists, no more blondes.  Maybe the IRS clapped him in prison for not paying taxes.  Maybe his theater finally became successful.  Maybe he decided there are worse things than working in television.  They only shoot at you with blanks there.

In the final chapter, Grofield wakes up to the vibration of the road they’re traveling, sees a strange face leaning over him–it’s a blonde all right, but not near as pretty as the one he saw when he woke up in a Mexican hotel room once.  He says as much.

“Aw,” the guy said.  “You’re disappointed.”

“Just so I wake up.  The girl’s name was Elly.”

“Right.  I’m Stan Devers.  Your friend Parker is driving this thing.”

Grofield tried to turn his head; it wouldn’t go.  Parker was driving the ambulance?  He whispered, “What the hell happened?”

“Well,” Stan Devers said, “that’s a long story.”

Long review too, and it’s not over yet.  I still have some questions to answer:

  • Why did Westlake stop writing Parker novels, or any other novels, under the name Richard Stark, for nearly a quarter century?
  • Why did he abandon the usual segmented chapter structure he’d employed in all but two of the Stark books?
  • Why did he bring Ed Mackey back from the dead without explaining how that happened or even mentioning Mackey’s apparent demise in the previous book?

I think the answer to all three questions is the same–this is not a true Richard Stark novel.  It’s a collaboration between Stark and Westlake.   Yes, I know that doesn’t make any sense.  Hear me out.

Westlake was starting to slip out of the Stark voice, as he was developing his own, which mingled elements of Stark, Coe, himself, maybe others.  It was getting harder for him to manage.   He’d written those books during a turbulent, often emotionally bruising period of his life–failed marriages, professional setbacks, and a rate of production that would have put most writers in a rubber room.

But he had Abby now.  He was older, more settled.   He no longer feared that Stark was the only voice of his that people really wanted (Dortmunder helped tremendously with that, and Dortmunder’s Starkian origins further blurred the line between Westlake and Stark).  He’d found a home for Westlake at M. Evans, that would allow him to hone his own voice, which was getting stronger all the time.  And he was increasingly aware that he hadn’t done this all by himself–he’d been surrounded all the time by friends, colleagues, spouses, lovers, kids, who had kept him afloat, offered help, advice, feedback, support, companionship.  No man is an island–not even a wolf-man.

So he wrote this one to more fully and explicitly express that side of Parker that had been there from the start–his long-frustrated quest for people he can trust. To show that Parker’s long losing streak in the Random House novels could only be ended with a little help from his friends.  And not everybody likes this.   But as that quote about the Greeks I put up top suggests, we’ve always had a dual vision of wolves–they can be the marauders who raid our camps, steal our livestock, chill our blood when we hear them howl on a dark night, while we wonder if they’re closing in on us–but they can also be the epitome of cooperation, camaraderie, and above all, loyalty, which is why we ended up making some of them into our best friends and helpmates.

And the thing is, they can be both of these things at the same time.  As Parker and his pack are in this story.   We feel a closeness to them in the chapters from their POV’s, and then we’re in the heads of the Tyler mob guys, and we shiver, thinking about what’s coming.  Our respect for the finer qualities of wolves should not blind us to the fact that they are still carnivores. And we are still made of meat.

So it wasn’t like the books he’d written before–he mingled his approach to storytelling with Stark’s, creating a fascinating hybrid–this is why he refers to so many books that appeared under his name over the past decade and change, as well as Stark’s.   This is why he used a chapter structure more appropriate to a Westlake novel (or a Culver?  Lots of politics here).

This is why he reached into the last novel and plucked Ed Mackey from his ignominious end, seemingly unscathed.   Because Westlake is a gentler god than Stark, and because he thought Mackey (and Brenda) were worth keeping around.  Westlake is much more reluctant to let go of good characters than Stark.   He didn’t explain Ed’s return because he knew it was an arbitrary authorial act–deus ex machina.   He explained it much later, along with Wycza’s return, probably just to make people stop bugging him about it.

The end result was a book that serves as a fitting capstone to everything that came before, and he may have felt on some level that no more was needed.   But he said that he tried later to write more Parker novels, and they just wouldn’t come. So I think the part of him that was Stark simply withdrew for a time, knowing that he wasn’t needed–that the purest expression of that aspect simply wouldn’t be possible for a time.

The Westlake who returned to writing as Stark around 1996 (interestingly enough, around the same time Butcher’s Moon was sold to Hollywood) was in his sixties, and feeling the tug of his mortality more and more.   That could have been enough, but there were other factors.   We’ll get to that too.

What we’ll get to next is as different from this book as a chuckle from a scream.  One of his finest comic novels, and certainly his most focused.   It all takes place in and around a prison.  And its hero is a real Kunt.  With an umlaut.

PS: I finished with the Japanese edition from Hayakawa, because it’s just so neat to see Westlake’s picture on the back cover.   Can anybody read the text?



Filed under Butcher's Moon, Donald Westlake novels, Parker Novels

35 responses to “Review: Butcher’s Moon, Part 3

  1. Ray Garraty

    Grandiosity and larger-than-life-ty are what makes this book powerful, that also makes it too straight-forward and sometimes cliched. I definetely prefer stories on a smaller scale, but any sane person can’t resist how powerful BM is.
    I still hold my opinion that Grofield died in that ambulance – right after the novel has ended. Stark just spared us of his death in front of us. I agree that it started about Grofield (Parker’s revenge and his actions), but then it became about something else, something different. Parker made a circle – he became the hunter again.
    Why these novels ended? probably because the time of wolves was over. Wolves were no longer free animals, their population has diminished. Brits killed all their wolves, Americans placed their wolves in parks, collared them, monitored them, bred them, and if the number of wolves was small, they bought them from Canada. Wolves couldn’t prey, couldn’t live in the old ways. Too many eyes around.
    Westlake understood that, and he made it the end of Parker.
    (You haven’t mentioned explicit language in this one, though you promised you would.)

    • Ray, you saw how long this one got–Part 3 went over 7,000 words, and that’s never happened before. I just could not cover everything. If you want to start a discussion on the undeleted expletives, I’ll happily join in.

      You prefer stories on a smaller scale, but how does that jibe with your love of Dostoevsky? I think pretty nearly all his novels are longer than this. Like twice as long–or more. The Russian novelists are world-renowned for their insight, their language, their grasp of human nature, but never their brevity, and grand social commentary is something they’re all very much concerned with.

      It’s possible Grofield died in the ambulance, but there’s lots of other characters we didn’t see again who are in this novel. Stan Devers is at least as close to Parker as Grofield–Parker’s young protege–and he’s never heard from again after Butcher’s Moon. Westlake denied he had any intention of killing Grofield off in that book, and Grofield is clearly on the road to recovery at the end.

      It doesn’t feel like we’re being told he’s going to croak. But we’re free to believe he did. Frankly, given what Parker told Grofield back in The Score, about paying his income taxes (which we’re intentionally reminded of at the start of this book), it seems more likely that he either went to jail for tax evasion, or that he and Mary left the country to avoid that. Canada has a thriving theater scene, and we know Grofield likes Mexico. Only fair Mary gets a chance to enjoy San Miquel de Allende too.

      Man, I’ve really made a convert with my wolf metaphor–I strongly believe Westlake saw Parker that way at least some of the time, but I doubt he’d end the books simply because real wolves were dying out–anyway, they’ve made quite a comeback in many areas. And coyotes may be more common now in North America than ever before. I try not to be too literal about these things. Doesn’t pay.

      But there is an analogy there, because the fact is, it’s getting harder–much harder–to justify Parker being able to keep pulling these jobs. He needs cash, or items that can be easily converted to cash. America was rapidly becoming a cashless economy. No cash payrolls, bank robberies are too complicated–you get a small score, and the Feds are all over you. Your picture ends up in the post offices. Westlake kept having to think of situations where there’d be a lot of cash that wasn’t well guarded enough. He maybe needed a bit of a break to come up with more credible scenarios like that. The next one would be a massive revival meeting.

      These things go in cycles, though–lots more cash out there now, particularly with the marijuana boom (you can’t put money from legal weed in a bank, so they’re using safes and credit unions).

      And there’s a lot more wolves roaming around these days. Coincidence, I’m sure. 😉

  2. The passage you quote is among my favorites as well, as Parker explains himself much more effectively (and much more plausibly) than he does in a similar circumstance in The Black Ice Score. What’s interesting to me about that passage is that Handy and Parker are both right, and they’re both a little wrong too.

    Handy says this isn’t like Parker, and it’s true that Parker has an every-man-for-himself attitude and a disdain for illogical acts. But we’ve also seen him again and again indulge in illogics of his own when faced with betrayal. I always come back to this quote from The Hunter: “I’m going to drink his blood, I’m going to chew up his heart and spit it into the gutter for the dogs to raise a leg at. I’m going to peel the skin off him and rip out his veins and hang him with them.” That’s pure emotion. Yes, Parker has them, but they always contain pragmatic element as well. Parker’s philosophy seems to be: Never let a betrayal slide (responding with overwhelmingly disproportionate response if necessary) and betrayals are less likely to occur in the future. If that were true, the novels would be a lot less interesting. (It’s worth noting that no one in the Tyler mob betrayed Parker. They were never his allies, nor were they under any ethical obligation to return his stolen money to him.)

    And yet isn’t it funny how many of Parker’s pragmatic little illogics involve rescuing Grofield? “We were working together,” he tells Grofield after a different dramatic rescue, but would Parker have extended himself as rigorously had Stan Devers been in Grofield’s shoes? I’m not so sure, and I’m also not sure how much of that is Westlake’s affection for Grofield steering the ship and how much is Parker’s. Theirs is an unlikely bromance, one that Parker would never acknowledge, even to himself. But if Parker is capable of feeling affection for a fellow heister, he certainly seems to feel it for Grofield. (So do I.)

    • You sum it up perfectly–there are contradictions here, but they are contradictions that serve the story, make it more interesting. Absolute consistency is dishwater dull. Human nature is full of such irresolvable divides between what we wish to be and what we are. Parker is human enough to share that with us. But it’s much less true of him than of a normal human being.

      Grofield is the other Stark protagonist. Even though he’s really more of a Westlake protagonist, as I’ve said too many times already. He’s still Stark’s other leading man, and so of course he gets a bit of extra consideration. On some metatextual level, Parker knows Grofield is more than just some guy. But he’d still leave him there without a backward glance, if Westlake hadn’t made sure Calesian pushed that button in his head. Or was it Stark? This is the tricky thing about collaborations. Particularly collaborations between two aspects of the same writer.

      Westlake was by no means sure he was done with Grofield, even though as it turned out, he was. The Stark in him maybe wants to finish Grofield off–just to show nobody is bulletproof in his world–but Westlake is compelled to conserve his best characters. So rare for him to outright kill a protagonist. You could argue he never really did (whereas Jim Thompson killed his off so many times, it got to feeling weird if they were still alive at the end). Some of them might have preferred death to the fates that awaited them, but that’s neither here nor there.

      So many passages in this book evoke passages from other books–that one from The Hunter is the obvious inspiration for Parker’s epic rant in this book. He doesn’t usually get so melodramatic about it. There’s no personal betrayal in this book at all, quite right–but he’s not really indulging a personal vendetta here, but a social one–it’s the whole town he’s mad at.

      See, he thought he had finally come to an understanding with the outfit that runs this town that has frustrated him so many times. First, he comes to an understanding with Lozini–but then Lozini gets killed. Then he goes to Buenadella, who says yes, you can have your money if you go away. Then Calesian sours the deal, nearly killing Grofield in the process. Then adds insult to injury with the finger, and the bogus offer of Grofield, the money, and the ambulance. That’s the straw that breaks the camel’s back. He’s not angry because any one person betrayed him, but because the entire town, as he sees it, keeps going back on its word.

      Fortunately for the good citizens of Tyler, his beef is only with the criminal cabal that owns their city. Once he’s cleansed it of that element, his mind returns to equilibrium, and he can shake the dust of Tyler from his shoes, and take his leave, never to return.

      So in essence, this is a rewrite of The Hunter and its belated sequel, The Outfit. With a goodly measure of 361 thrown in (repeated references to the guns coming out), and maybe a little of The Mercenaries. And a seasoning of so many other books Westlake wrote between ’60 and ’73 that I quite simply lost count.

      It lacks the crisp concise perfection of the best early Starks. But it’s not aiming for that, so we can’t fault it for not being what it isn’t trying to be.

      But I can certainly be faulted for writing a review that ended up just around 19,000 words. Starkian I ain’t. :\

    • The closer analogy, to me, is The Seventh. There Parker acts really stupidly,doing things he should know won’t work: staying around after the job is done, having his gang of obvious heisters pretending to be straight, going the same places the cops will go. And it’s all because he needs to punish the man who killed his woman (and stole his goods, but I think the woman is the real trigger. She’s the first one he’s let even a little bit close to him since Lynn.) And Parker reaps what he should have expected: his whole gang killed or captured (mostly killed.)

      Here, the enemy is torturing someone they assume Parker cares about (and once again, they’ve got his money too.) They’re telling Paker that they’ve beaten him: either he gives in to save Grofield, or he’s afraid to do that and runs away. Again, Parker needs to see them punished, but this time he can do that and be smart at the same time.

      • This time, Parker is honest with himself, and his crew, about why they’re doing this–he answers Handy’s question. And this time, he’s hand-picked the string, and planned the operation out himself, and he’s learned everything he needs to know to make it work. And of course, he knows who he’s after–he’s got names and faces. If you’re going to fight a war, know who and where your enemy is.

        It is very much the Anti-Seventh, but then why not reference that book directly? Would have been simple enough to show Parker thinking to himself that this time he’s going to do it differently.

        Best answer I can come up with is still that The Seventh (and The Sour Lemon Score) are books about Parker the lone wolf. Even The Jugger, which is referenced, is about Parker coming to check on a colleague, maybe to kill him, but it’s still a social act–he’s still doing it as part of a loose-knit collective. The only two Stark novels Westlake fails to mention–two of the very best Stark ever wrote–are focused on Parker either acting on his own, or failing to mesh well with a string–he fails in a group, and then succeeds as a solo operative (well, he doesn’t succeed monetarily in the latter book), and that’s not what Butcher’s Moon is about. Butcher’s Moon is about Parker the pack animal. And I think Westlake himself was probably feeling more like a pack animal when he wrote it.

        That’s a very imperfect incomplete answer. But it’s all I’ve got.

  3. Posting this in the comments section, because I can’t convince myself it’s worth its own article, but just to make Ray happy, I’m going to bring it up–it is a sign of the changing times. Also, I realized I could use Google Books to do word searches. Speaking of changing times.

    The Stark novels are full of crime and blood and vengeance and lust, and up until Plunder Squad, convey all this without the use of so much as one delete-able expletive. Plunder Squad uses the word ‘shit’ six times.

    Butcher’s Moon likewise gives precisely six shits–and eight fucks! Man, we are in the 70’s! It should be pointed out, that the words are used entirely for exclamatory emphasis–nobody says “I’m going to go take a shit” or “Let’s fuck, baby.” It’s all “Go fuck yourself” or “What the fuck happened?” or just plain “Fuck.”

    The only meaning I draw from this is that the publishing industry is changing, and Westlake is changing with it.

    Okay, Mr. Garraty, I brought it up–now do you have anything to add? If you’re going to say Mr. Westlake learned naughty words from George V. Higgins, I am going to have to call bullshit. 😉

    • Ray Garraty

      I found that quite paradoxal that paperbacks didn’t contain any explicit words. It was probably because it was books for all, sort of modern fairy tales, where salty language might have soured the pleasure from the reading. Hardcovers by default are “books for adults”, so – with changes in fiction on all fronts – publishers gave writers a green light for using explicit words. Westlake, starting with Plunder Squad, probed the ground and then switched to new mode in BM. I closely paid attention to this during reading Parker books, that’s why I was struck when I’d read “shit” in PS and “fuck” in BM. It was time to move closer to reality.
      I have a feeling that Parker is not one of those who overuse four-letter words (they are both four-letter words, right?). He rarely shows emotions, therefore he doesn’t really need the strong words, unless it’s used in a command. But one has to expect strong language from men of Parker’s profession. It seems obvious that heisters won’t talk like they are nuns.

      • I think that’s partly it–but it’s also that publishing standards in general are relaxing, and he can get more past the editors–they may even be asking for more, I dunno. Give the people what they want.

        It’s not like he was using these words in his early hardcovers, either. I’d assume a problem with the paperback originals is that they’re being sold on newsstands, in candy stores, drugstores, etc–even though the Supreme Court had ruled that it was lawful to publish books with these words, there could still be local ordinances that would get the books confiscated. Actual booksellers will run to the Supreme Court screaming censorship. You’re running a newsstand, you don’t have the time for that. They’re selling lots of really dirty material, you understand, but they’re supposed to keep it behind the counter.

        What’s really funny is that the sleaze paperbacks are all about fucking and never once do you see the word ‘fuck’. Larry Block’s Ronald Rabbit Is a Dirty Old Man uses it like he’s getting paid a hundred bucks for each use, but that wasn’t a true sleaze–he was writing it after the form had died, and he was reacting to the huge success of books like Portnoy’s Complaint. Must have been a relief to use the proper descriptive term for the act he was describing.

        Westlake got away with using the somewhat obscure slang term ‘gash’, starting in The Rare Coin Score (1967), and it recurred here and there (it’s in our next book). I don’t think he liked ‘pussy’, which is used in the same way (never much cared for it myself). Parker and Claire are out getting materials for the heist, and one of the suppliers asks Parker if Claire is his woman–when Parker responds in the affirmative, the guy says approvingly, “Good gash.” I had never encountered that term for female genitalia (applied to the woman as a whole in this case) in my life before then, and I haven’t led that sheltered an existence. So I guess that’s how he snuck it in. Just too uncommonly used to be objectionable. Maybe it was a thing guys said upstate.

        You may be surprised to learn that the first Westlake character to use ‘shit’ may have actually been a Tucker Coe character–in A Jade in Aries (1970), Mitch Tobin tells the cop interrogating him “It’s time to shit or get off the pot.” Meaning book me or release me. The word appears twice in Don’t Lie to Me as well. Testing the waters, maybe? No F-bombs. Butcher’s Moon probably was the first Westlake to drop one.

        Can’t find any of the better known four-letter words in the 1960’s novels–not the ones I can seach on Google books, anyway. I guess I should have been taking notes when reading them. Profanity is so commonplace now, the eye has a tendency to jump over it.

        The book I’m reviewing next has a fair bit of profanity as well–its first appearance, I believe, in a Westlake comic caper, though Jimmy the Kid has two shits in it–both emanating from the mouth of Mr. Dortmunder himself. And there’s a ton of profanity in some of the later Dortmunders, but somehow it always seems so–innocent.

        Overall, Westlake didn’t like to ‘work blue’ that much–not for its own sake. As you say, he puts the language in when it would sound funny to leave it out. But to overuse it is to weaken its impact. It becomes a crutch. Some people talk like that all the time, some just now and again, and some never at all. And those that use it may have their own individual styles of profanity.

        So use it for character, and for atmosphere, but never for shock value. Because by the mid-70’s, I don’t think even nuns were shocked by this kind of language (if they ever were). And there’s a Dortmunder coming up that’s full of nuns–and a fair few F-bombs. But not in the same chapter. A good Catholic boy at heart, is our Don. 😉

        • Ray Garraty

          However unserious this topic may seem it actually needs more research and more discussion, probably even in academic field. We share a view on why there wasn’t that kind of language in paperbacks. But was it the only factor? Were there others? And which side produced the demand for it, writers or publishers? Horace McCoy used a few profanities in his books in the 40s, Westlake got around to them in the 70s. I have a feeling that Grofield might have used salty language a bit more if it was allowed. Dortmunder books just ask for explicit language.
          The last four Parker novels do feel like mature works of a mature writer. Mature language is one part of a mature book.

          And gash? In Russian it is short for hashish (h becomes g).

          • I don’t think the earlier Parkers are less mature because they don’t use those words. Frankly, I don’t notice their absence when I’m reading them, and I don’t notice their presence that much when I’m reading the later ones–I needed you to point it out to me. It’s more of a garnish than a major ingredient. I guess it is more realistic, but as I said, noir is romanticized realism, and there’s nothing terribly romantic about these words.

            The Supreme Court decision regarding James Joyce’s Ulysses in 1933 made it legal to publish books with words like ‘shit’ and ‘fuck’, and to graphically describe sexual thoughts and acts. But there was a catch–you had to be able to demonstrate that there was no pornographic intent, that you were doing it for ‘artistic’ purposes.

            And as I mentioned, a bookseller was in a better position to refer to the Supreme Court decision than a guy running a newsstand or a drugstore in a small town–not to mention that some of those small business owners would be afraid of offending customers–the books are just a sideline. I mean, you’re going to have a hard time claiming the average lurid paperback original is a work of art. NOW some of us may think of them as that, but back then it would have sounded pretty funny.

            The Mike Hammer books were all originally published as hardcovers, I believe, and they don’t seem to use that kind of language. But see, those started in the late 40’s (when hardly anybody was using that language), and then began to sell in enormous numbers in paperback. To a very wide audience. The publisher wouldn’t want to threaten that. McCoy was writing for a much smaller more adult audience, and the stories he told may have better justified the use of the profanities from a legal standpoint. It’s easier to make the case that what he’s doing is art, since it’s not about private dicks and bank heists and murder mysteries.

            The gates didn’t open wide for this kind of thing until the 70’s. At which point just about any book written for adults had those words in it, as well as an almost obligatory sex scene. Peter Benchley’s Jaws came out in ’74, was a huge bestseller, and I remember reading an article in the New York Times about how it was marketed–it said that Benchley originally wrote a rather tame sex scene for Chief Brody and his wife, and the publisher thought that wasn’t racy enough, so he had to come up with a passionate affair between the wife and Hooper (who did not look like Richard Dreyfus in the book). People had started to expect four letter words and explicit descriptions of coitus from certain types of books. The book isn’t about sex, isn’t about an affair, it’s about a giant killer fish. But mingling sex and death is always good for sales.

            Used to be you’d kill sales by including this material; now not including it would be a problem. That’s probably one reason why Westlake put in that very arousing (and well-written) scene between Grofield and Dori the librarian. Same publication year as Jaws. So it started out as “You can do it if your artistic muse tells you to” and it ended as “You can do it if your publisher thinks it’ll sell more books.”

            On a whim, I did a Google Books search in Willeford’s Cockfighter, which is one of the most profane books I can think of–nary a dirty word in it. Of course, in spite of the fact that the protagonist has a value system that is utterly alien and unique to himself, he doesn’t seem like the kind of man who’d use those words, does he? In his mind, he’s leading a very proper moral life. Technically, he’s not saying any words for most of the book, but he could think them–he doesn’t want to. And that book did start as a paperback original (that hardly anybody read). It’s all the more shocking for the absence of that language, somehow.

            It ought to be purely the writer’s choice whether to use the language, but in commercial publishing, it’s never that simple.

            • Ray, picking up our enumeration of Westlake’s profanations, I’m afraid I missed one–and you would think this would have been the first book I’d look at–Adios, Scheherazade (1970). I know. DUH. I mean, “Nobody writes this shit forever.” That’s a line from the book. That I quoted in my review. Senility, here I come.

              It’s not what you’d call obscenity-laden, but it does have the f-word in it. Edwin Topliss says he doesn’t want to fuck up. Later, he says he doesn’t want to write a scene where his wife Betsy is fucking with somebody else (the word actually being used to refer to the sex act). I can’t say how many times this and other four-letter words appear, because this one never got an electronic edition, and thus is not searchable on Google Books. Somebody would have to go through it page by page, and make a list. I don’t think either of us has the time.

              Thing is, Ed is trying to write a sleaze novel, and sleaze novels, bizarrely, never used obscenities. The writers would go into conniption fits trying to find fornicative euphemisms. So Ed using those words when he goes off the rails and starts typing his random thoughts out on paper is a rebellion against the constraints of that ‘genre’, such as it was.

              So it seems like 1970 was the big break-out year for naughty words, at least as far as Westlake was concerned. Unless we’re forgetting something else.

              • Ray Garraty

                I’d missed it because I didn’t read it. Funny that a book on sleazes has obscenities, but actual sleazes don’t.

  4. Chris Ward

    The Japanese edition says “Akutou PaahKaah – Satsuriku no Tsuki”: Villain Parker – Slaughter Moon, by Richaado Sutaaku.

    Parker would go over well in Japan. He’s a ronin, a masterless samurai who lives by his own hard code.

    • Thanks, Chris–can you translate some of the text on the back cover, with Westlake’s photo on it? Do they say he (or Stark) is a masterless samurai who lives by his own hard code? That would have gone over really well with him. 😉

  5. Chris Ward

    The copy on the back is just a précis of the book’s plot (with some backstory from Slayground). I didn’t want to go to all the trouble of translating, so I fed it to a program to do it for me– amusing reading if you like dada–

    “Paakaa was furious. Who than anything, that 73,000 US dollars is something of par over and Gurofirudo (Grofield). So as to intercept the people of gold guy, what Rio Pardon it would be big game and will not be. In beaten up until it lies up in the sound, only the stolen minute to let someone make discharged it. It is, but the variety of paths car style! Two years ago Paakaa and Gurofirudo the run and took the cash, and occur a car accident. Paakaa’s hiding in an amusement park, the town of organized crime, it is surrounded by the subordinates of the furnace Rojini, fled to hide forced gold it was. It is now, and come along with the Gurosufirudo to skip back to take the gold, gold was gone from hiding place. It is not the difference in the work of organized crime. One person was boss to dominate the city. The resolute and challenge Rojini two slams. Who, more of Rojini were baffled. Duo of man, to request and return the money without remember to wear, it began to hit one after another under the club and factories. The election of the city is close to this time, we want to avoid the cause trouble. Rojini has offered cease-fire agreement in Paakaa. However the truce was broken by the traitor of the organization. But the son of man aiming secretly position of boss took the gold, Paakaa you charge the brunt of the attack, increase the fire, strikes back to unscrupulous traitor! Villain Paakaa and his friends, Ru Osoikaka mighty criminal organization. Premier epic yelling prime all the charm of the series.”

  6. Denny Lien

    “Gash” in the vulgari sense described here was also used (in that sense) by a thug in the James Bond novel THE SPY WHO LOVED ME, as I recall.

    Denny Lien

    • Looking around online, I got the impression it’s more commonly used in the UK. Westlake might have picked it up when he was in the Air Force, or he might have read it in British crime/spy/suspense fiction–I’m sure he read the Bond novels.

  7. Stan Devers sort of reminds me of Anne Marie Carpinaw. They’re both interesting characters in their first appearance, but thereafter show up in cameos, just long enough to say how much they enjoy being a heister/heister’s girlfriend.

    • Harsh, dude. Stan is enjoyable enough in his two subsequent appearances, but he’s basically Stark’s equivalent of the naive but eager young journeyman we see in Westlake’s books (I forget the name of the kid who joins the Dortmunder gang, late in the series). Being a Stark character, he’s a lot meaner and tougher, but it’s the same pattern. The point of him is to show Parker likes to teach, and that he collects people–grooms talent, and then uses it. Once Stan’s a fully seasoned pro, as I think we can say he is by the end of this book, the point of him is lost. So we don’t see him again.

      For the same reason, perhaps, we don’t see Grofield again. In the later run of Parker books, Westlake had less use for this type of character–they make less sense in the more difficult and far less romantic world of the late Parkers. An actor who operates a theater under his own name? By 1997, you’ve got internet search engines. But even leaving that aside, he’s just too nice. So he doesn’t make the big time jump with Parker, Wycza, Mackey, a few others. He can’t handle that much reality.

      There is one later book with a young journeyman heister who screws up, but the question there isn’t whether Parker will teach him, but whether Parker will kill him.

      • Ray Garraty

        I don’t remember if we discussed this aspect of the Parker series, but it came to me just today: what competition Parker had in the heist world? It’s such a closed and trusted community, that the only people who double cross Parker are his partners and ex-partners. There were no cases when two groups of heisters tried to steal the same thing at the same time. It seems like there were no competition among thieves.

        • It’s funny you should mention that–it obviously occurred to Westlake as well, since he later wrote a short story in which Dortmunder tries to rob a bank at the same exact time as another crew.

          I don’t know if anything like that ever happened in real life, even in the golden age of Dillinger. I don’t know if heisters have rivalries. I think they mainly just want to get the money and stay out of jail. Somehow, I don’t see Al Nussbaum bitching because some other son of a bitch is higher than him on the most-wanted list. But I really don’t know.

          • Ray Garraty

            The chances are slim that they run into each other. Heisters are loners, but Stark makes it look like there is a tight community, like they have a union.

            • And I’m pretty sure that’s a fictional convention, but it’s one that was well-established before Westlake wrote The Hunter. In reality, it’s probably somewhat more like the Dortmunder books, believe it or not. You have a group of guys that work together regularly–now and again, somebody new gets inducted. Dillinger had a steady string he worked with. Eventually, Baby Face Nelson started his own crew. I don’t think either of them had a list of phone numbers to call. Not enough people had their own phones back then, anyway.

              But for the purposes of the Parker books, it works really well to have this situation where Parker is always working with new people. It’s not a union, so much as a network.

              I’d assume a lot of people who rob banks meet up in prison. Some may be family members–many examples of that. You would want somebody you knew well, and trusted to at least some extent. Parker can’t trust anybody, and he has no family, and until very late in the series, he never goes to prison, unless you count a forced labor camp.

              Thing is, a lot of guys in prison wrote to ‘Richard Stark’ telling him how great his books were. I’m sure some people working in intelligence love glamorized spy books that bear little resemblance to the realities of their profession, real cowboys love to watch westerns, real gangsters love mobster films. So that doesn’t prove they get everything right, but to please people who are actually in a given line of work, you have to get something right, or they won’t buy it.

              Now the elite heisters–the ones that do airport heists, art heists, the really complex jobs, the ones who very often get away with it–there’s less known about them. Honestly, I could do some research, and maybe I will at some point, but this is a blog about fiction, you know. And had Westlake stuck strictly to fact when telling his stories, there’d be a lot fewer of them, and they’d be a lot less interesting–we have non-fiction for facts about people who aren’t like us, but fiction is for telling deeper truths that touch on all of our lives.

              Most of us don’t commit armed robberies, but all of us know there are times when you go it alone, and times when you need a crew behind you. The Parker books are, to a great extent, about balancing rugged individuality with collective effort, and there’s nothing harder. The books up to now have all shown Parker failing to some extent to pull this balancing act off, more in some books than others–this time he succeeds absolutely. That’s what makes it such a satisfying climax to the first series of books. Now that leads to the question–does he ever succeed like this again in the subsequent books? Did Stark become less optimistic, less romantic, in his old age?

  8. Man, it’s really weird to have Parker think: “What was this shit?” I had gotten used to the series using the old Hollywood style of cursing up to so to see him say that made me do a double take.

    Anyway, on to the Avengers: Endgame of Parker!

    I’m not sure I can add much because you went through this one thoroughly. Though, even if you haven’t, I’m not sure there’s much I could say anyway, because, well, Butcher’s Moon is a damn good book with a big fuck off climax that matches toe to toe with The Seventh as one of the series’ best climaxes. I wouldn’t rank the book as a whole that highly but I must give credit where it’s due.

    You mentioned the possible parallels between this and The Godfather which I think’s appropriate because this honestly feels like Westlake’s attempt at an airport novel. Loads of characters, an epic in scope story, and shit tons of violence. Of course, Butcher’s Moon is a lot better than the archetypical “airport novel” (not that all books belonging in that alleged subgenre are bad anyway but that’s a whole other topic).

    Rather surprised that only Ducasse died during the rescue/shootout. I expected a LOT more heisters to get killed off including, pardon the blasphemy, Handy McKay. Not that I WANTED such a thing to happen but I originally figured that the Starkian angel of death had finally caught up with Handy for evading death in The Mourner. But nope, Handy goes on to fight another day, and aren’t we all thankful!

    However, I do wonder if maybe Westlake was being a bit TOO benevolent here. Like, you’re telling an army of eleven fought (And killed!) off an army of forty and they only had ONE casualty along with only one wounded? I get they’re professionals but that’s some DAMN strong luck they had on their side. I mean, I am glad all but one of them made it out ok but I also can’t help feeling it lowered the stakes a bit.

    I’m with you in thinking that Westlake brought Mackey back from the grave because he felt he had more use for him. However, while apparently there is a scene in the Final Eight that explains how Dan Wyzca evaded death, I’m still convinced Westlake just confused him with Dan KIFKA of The Seventh that one time and this was his attempt at correcting the mistake. I mean, in the end, I’m not sure it really matters all that much. Buuuut, the idea’s really funny to me so it’s what I believe until I’m presented with further evidence 😛

    I gotta say, I really softened on Dunstan with his final appearance. Like, give the kid this, he at least had enough guts left in him to actually get off the pot and refuse to take part in the corruption anymore. It’s sadly not often when people see a sign and proceed to take the hint. Like with O’Hara who apparently hasn’t learned jack shit.

    Speaking of crooked cops, Calesian is probably the best of the bad cop characters in Parker, even topping Edgars. There’s just something chilling about a guy who finally gets a taste of ruthless criminal power and almost immediately goes “Yeah, I want THIS!” Whatever else you can say about Calesian, he’s arguably the most honest of the crooked cops we met so far. He’s not particularly interested in pretending to care about protecting and serving (not others, anyway). He just wants to be the boss and he prefers to do it in the most violent way possible. Hell, maybe THAT’S why Westlake wrote about Caleisan killing O’Hara and Dunstan. They were a lot more self deceiving than him. I imagine Calesian being played by a 70’s era John Saxon or an 80’s era Kurtwood Smith.

    Lozini’s an interesting character, almost a failed Bronson the same way Quittner’s a failed Parker. Lozini tries to have the same stubborn bluster as Bronson but he just lacks the heart to keep going after taking an actual hard hit. Say what you will about Bronson, he never gave in to Parker, even if it meant his demise.

    I myself posit that Butcher’s Moon DOES pay tribute to The Seventh and The Sour Lemon Score, thematically at least. The murders of O’Hara and Dunstan are highly evocative of the way George O’Hara kills in the Sour Lemon Score, very fast and enough to jar the reader. And the fact that Calesian’s not revealed to us yet is evocative of The Amateur, who for the longest time is an absolute enigma to us until the part Three. Probably not the fanservice I wanted, but I think it works all the same.

    When it comes to Handy’s summation about Parker, I too wonder if Handy was accurate as he assumed. Thing is, as we’ve all observed, Parker’s not above going out of his way to save people he cares about. In fact, if I may be so bold, I’d argue that Grofield’s (seeming) death actually did get to him, even before he saw the finger. When a fellow heister got killer in the opening jewelry heist, Parker not only didn’t think a damn thing about him, he moved on as if nothing had happened. When Grofield got shot and presumably killed, though? Not only does Parker lament that “It was too bad about Grofield”, you’ll notice in the next chapter from his POV, Parker is written as driving with a rage in him. Of course, that rage could also be explained as him being pissed off at Calesian fucking shit up. As you yourself noted in our discussion on The Handle, there’s always enough grey area for one to come to any conclusion they want about whether he actually does give a damn about other heisters.

    Finally, as far as Butcher’s Moon’s status as “the original finale” I’m more aligned to your thinking. My guess is, Butcher’s Moon was meant to be equivalent to a SEASON finale, as opposed to a SERIES finale. Meant to conclude several arcs and go all out, yes, but not to the point of ending Parker’s adventures. But then, of course, Westlake tried writing another Parker and it just…didn’t click. And it wouldn’t for the next couple decades.

    Overall, a satisfying as hell entry in the Parker Series. If this did end up being the finale, (which it was for the longest time to veteran Parker fans) at least it went out with a thousands bangs.

    P.S. I think my edition has a weird typing problem in it, near the end of Chapter 24 it reads like this: “Lozini. Not some two bit hood, not a dime-store cop, but Lozini himself. I was always afraid of that bastard, Calesian or federal people–and call Dutch Buenadella. But the first coming up into his mouth.

    “After a few minutes he calmed down and took two Alka-Seltzer and left the apartment to find a phone booth–because he couldn’t be sure if his own phone was tapped or not, by state or federal people–and call Dutch Buenadella. But the first three times he dialed, the line was busy.”

    I take it your copy isn’t like that. 😛

    • Thanks for giving me the chapter, because my copy is The First Edition, complete with immaculate dust jacket, and that cellophane wrapper public libraries used once to protect it, and no, I didn’t steal it from a library, hopefully the eBay seller didn’t either. Ray Garraty, our resident eBay maven, gave me a hot tip.

      And yes, that’s exactly how it reads in my copy. It’s only the first paragraph that’s a problem. I assume there are italics in your version? Kindle can do italics. The italics are meant to denote Calesian’s fuzzy frantic thought processes–actual words popping into his head. He’s never killed anyone before. He’s in a really dangerous place now. Starkian steam of consciousness, not to be confused with Joycean (references to excrement) or Faulknerian (endless southernisms).

      So it could just be it’s mean to read that way, but somehow I doubt it. Westlake wrote everything on a Smith Corona Silent Super. At some point a big stack of paper, probably with marginal corrections, and no doubt plenty of wite-out, was delivered to Random House, and conveyed to your typical over-worked underpaid array of copy editors and proof readers. I think a few words got lost in the wash. Calesian never got to finish his thought.

      The idea at the end of the paragraph is, he didn’t know who the traitor was, blurted out the first name because he was scared of Lozini’s gun. So that’s correct. There’s no mistakes in that sense. All the words there are supposed to be there. But not all the words supposed to be there are there. Yeah, I meant to type that. That was me. :\

      This tends to substantiate my suspicion that Westlake wasn’t working with Lee Wright at Random House anymore. This isn’t the mystery division, and I don’t even know if she was still on-staff there. Not nearly enough info about her online. Used to be a very good article I’d linked to elsewhere, which then vanished from the web. Should have printed it out. Westlake thought more of her than just about everybody he ever worked with in publishing combined, with the likely exception of Bucklin Moon.

      (And hey! The last of the First Sixteen has a title that begins with a ‘b’ word, and ends with Moon! Butcher and Bucklin both have seven letters and begin with ‘Bu’! See, there’s always something new you can find!)

      She wouldn’t have let such a sloppy mistake get through. Which doesn’t excuse me for missing it. You can get so caught up in these books, the words just fly by. Very nice catch. So don’t blame U. of Chicago. It’s not like they could go back in time and grab the sheet of paper out of Westlake’s hand once it came out of the typewriter. And hey, it could be his mistake. But I don’t think so. Maybe he got preoccupied with other matters, didn’t pay close enough attention to how they dealt with the manuscript. Still, if this were a ‘serious’ writer, the kind who gets more than a brief snippet of a review in the Times, from a moonlighting music critic, they’d have called him and made sure.

      Westlake really wanted to hammer home his point about how individualists have it all over organization men. I mean, zero heisters died in The Outfit, which this revisits and enlarges upon. Parker is in his Uber-Planner mode, meaning he’s figured out all their weak spots, everywhere they’re soft, and just how to get past their hastily erected defenses, and make it almost impossible for them to fight back. Does that trick with the car headlights work? I have no idea, but I believe it when I read it.

      You can say you don’t believe it, but at the start of 2022, who believed Ukraine (pop. 44 mil) could beat Russia? (pop. 144mil)? Not without a lot of casualties, no. But that’s a war. This is a heist. And a hit. It wasn’t that they were lucky. More that Ducasse wasn’t. And they were just flat-out better. Quality of troops matters. So does whoever is leading your pack on the hunt.

      Why not grouse that Grofield didn’t die? He got pumped full of bullets, and never saw the inside of a hospital. As I said, this is Westlake collaborating with Stark, and Westlake is Vishnu to Stark’s Shiva. Shiva demanded a sacrifice, Westlake decided who he could afford to lose.

      Handy’s too damn good to die. But like Grofield, he never returns after this. Just slips away into the aether, and we never find out why. Mainly because the style of the Final Eight is less–I really don’t want to use the word cozy. Collegial? Let’s say that. Parker will never have a string like this ever again. (Dortmunder will, a good while from now, when he squares off against his universe’s Donald Trump).

      I think I’ve said all I can ever possibly say about why Parker felt he had to save Grofield. If they hadn’t promised him Grofield and an ambulance (and shown him that finger), he might not have bothered, but you make a verbal contract with Parker with the intent to break it, it’s signed in blood–yours. Yeah, it bothered him, but Westlake needed to give him a lot more motivation to make it work, and used Handy’s Socratic inquiry to underscore the fact that he’s unusually well-motivated here.

      (I was really happy to find that quote from Plato’s Animals–book crossed my desk before I wrote this, and I kept a copy of that page, figuring I could use it later. Humans have been comparing themselves with wolves basically ever since they first crossed paths. Often finding themselves coming off second best in the comparison).

      I don’t think Westlake ever consciously wrote a definitive finale to any series of novels–to a series of short stories, once. Unequivocal finales to very long stories are harder to stick than Olympic gymnast landings. If you don’t have to write one, why do it at all? But he would sometimes hedge his bets–if he wasn’t sure he was coming back to a given franchise in the near future, or maybe ever, he might write it as if it could be the finish. And in this case, it nearly was.

      One reason, I believe, why he so rarely killed off his main characters is that he was very conscious of his own mortality. He only survived to adulthood because they had just developed a soy-based baby formula he could digest. Not even his mother’s own milk could nourish him. His father never saw 60, his mother doesn’t seem to have lived much longer. Most of his career he was an orphan. So for all the mayhem and murder in his books, understand–to him, all lives really do matter. But particularly those he’s given some portion of his own self. And those who die only do so because of wrong choices they made. For failing to understand themselves well enough. He is a just god.

      And while I think death is simply the price we pay for living, and God owes us nothing more than that original gift, we do not live in a Donald E. Westlake novel. This is not nearly well plotted enough.


      • One more point I want to make is that what Parker does when somebody pushes that button in his head–that’s not revenge. At least not according to the ethos of these books. We’ve heard this before, from others besides Handy–Grace Weiss tells him she doesn’t think he’s the revenge type in The Sour Lemon Score. Which begs the question– if it’s not revenge, what is it then?

        Revenge is hot blood. Parker only kills in cold blood. In The Hunter, he strikes and mocks Lynn–he doesn’t kill her. He can’t. We’re told he’s afraid of her–because he knows he has no defense against her.

        He can’t kill her, but he makes her decide to kill herself. That’s revenge. That’s the only act of revenge he commits in all the books. That’s hot blood. That’s betrayed love, or the ruins of it, as I said once. He kills Mal (who nobody loves) in cold blood. With his hands. And he’s in a very serene contemplative state of mind afterwards. That’s the moment he becomes fully lupine in his way of thought. That’s his second birth (and Westlake was interested in that, as some of his comments about the James Bond franchise indicated much later).

        From that moment onwards, no more hot blood. Maybe a bit in The Seventh, where he’s been knocked really off-kilter by The Amateur–but not compared to Little Bob Negli, who is 100% about revenge, against anyone who offends him, against Life itself for making him a dwarf–there’s a contrast being drawn, as there is so often in the Parkers. Parker doesn’t do revenge. He just balances out a scale in his head. Once it’s balanced, he forgets. And there’s usually nobody left to forgive.

        (One later book could be said to be about Parker’s kind of forgiveness. It ends in a forest. You’ll know it when you see it.)

        So this is why Handy is concerned. It’s not like the Parker he knows to want revenge. He doesn’t fully understand Parker’s process here, based on their past escapades, and he needs to know his leader hasn’t gone nuts. He has every right to ask a few questions.

        Parker wasn’t trying to kill the entire Outfit–just Bronson, to take the heat off, and get his money. That’s completely understandable to Handy, who if anything was more loyal to Parker than Parker was comfortable with–Parker wants the people working with him to be working for themselves–as wolves always do.

        This job needs a bit more explaining. And when Parker finishes, Handy understands. He’s got the context to make sense of it. This is a more intense version of the Parker he knows–it isn’t enough to just kill one man. Parker is still Parker. That means the job is good. And that means he’s in.

        But as he said, he was in the moment he got the call. Because he’s been jonesing for a good score. He wants to prove he’s still got it. And how good did it feel when he rolled that bomb into the room? Handy really is the shit, ain’t he? And he goes out a winner. If he’d stuck around, maybe not. There are at least two characters physically resembling him in The Final Eight. Let’s say it doesn’t work out so well for them.

        • Yes, my copy has italics. I just can’t do them on WordPress comments (or I don’t know how to at any rate). I am surprised to find out this was in the original edition though. No offense to U. Of Chicago but I did in fact assume this was a result of a publishing error on their part. (Iirc, they had other minor errors in early editions of their publications that were corrected later on.)

          It wasn’t so much believability as it was me expecting more bodies to drop because Stark had a habit of pretty much killing off a lot of supporting heisters in this era of the series. In retrospect, perhaps I was being too “blood for the blood god” (or, would that be goddess in my case?) in this regard. Hell, I didn’t grouse about Grofield not dying because…well, I liked Grofield.

          And for the record, I’m not saying it was revenge that led Parker to wage war on the Tyler Mob. I’m very much in your boat of “The mob fucked up bad. They gotta fucking die. Simply has to be done.” I just think it was more personal than Parker wants to believe.

          Fair enough on why Handy questioned Parker, though. Didn’t think of it like that so I appreciate the elaboration!

          And yes, Handy is the shit.

          • Or really, he’s da bomb. 😐

            The books where a lot of string members die, it’s usually because of a cross, something went really wrong with the heist, or both. And that’s usually what the story is about (and with the exception of Salsa, these are single-use characters we never met before).

            Very rarely does it run this smooth, and that’s because Parker is much more dangerous in this frame of mind. And because Westlake is a believer in the old maxim, the bigger they are, the harder they fall.

            None of the guys he convinced to make war on The Outfit via epistolary persuasion were killed–because The Outfit wasn’t ready for them. And The Outfit didn’t come after any of them later (which is the way guys who steal from the Mafia usually buy it) because Parker arranged a change-up at the top, and Karns isn’t stupid. Parker gave him an easy way to remove a rival, and there’s a reason Karns makes one last appearance in this book.

            It’s not meant to be realistic. It’s meant to be compelling and believable and to express a certain (for want of a less German word), Weltanschauung. It’s better to stand on your own, but if you’re going to stand against an organization, you better have people you can rely on in the clutch behind you. And you have to give those people a good reason to get behind you. And I agree with this, even while conceding that it almost certainly wouldn’t be this easy in real life. Fuck real life, you know? Yeah, you do. 😉

  9. And so we conclude the “Growing Eight”. I know you split them up into two sets of four but just roll with me here. Anyway, end of season thoughts!

    The word I’d use to describe this set is “Change”. While the Original Eight wasn’t quite static, it still followed a formula of sorts. You could expect at least a few constants throughout that bunch. Here though? You can’t even expect the damn FORMAT to stay the same.

    Parker doesn’t always come out on top anymore, there aren’t always main villains in a given installment anymore, there’s not even a girl of the week for Parker to bonk anymore! Parker’s more or less married, he’s got a home base, and most importantly he’s not as infallible anymore.

    Odd as it may seem in hindsight, The Rare Coin Score is the only entry in the Growing Eight that really follows the Parker formula. Even The Black Ice Score bucks the system a bit by having Parker dip before the big heist goes down and also that one chapter which is a Parker monologue. It’s rather ironic, considering The Rare Coin Score is also meant to be a new start for the character.

    Again, the Original Eight played with formula as well, quite a bit. But it wasn’t to THIS extent. I feel Westlake treated this batch like a sandbox to play around in. Really experiment with the character, the world, and even the format of these books.

    Of course, it’s not just the desire to tinker with the status quo that brings out change, it’s also the world that Westlake’s writing to.
    The mob’s getting phased out by the mafia, payrolls of hard cash are getting phased out in the midst of credit cards, the mainstream entertainment industry are starting to allow sex to sell outside of porno theaters and sleaze paperbacks, and there’s a new collection of curse words being used in our cultural vernacular. Westlake had new toys to play with, and he was gonna have some fun.

    All of this paid off with interest, producing some of the best entries in the entire series. And even the lesser installments still have something to offer. I’ve heard that the Final Eight are a bit more traditional, leaning back on the formula a bit, and if that’s true, I can actually understand that. After all, Westlake already pushed the envelope to its limits with this batch. It could be that Westlake just felt he didn’t need to reinvent the wheel as hard. He already did that, extremely well in fact, so why not return to the basics? (Though, it should be said, Westlake still had new tricks up his sleeve…)

    My ranking of the Growing Eight:

    1. Slayground: Byotiful. Issa mastapiece. No notes.

    2. The Sour Lemon Score: It might not be as tightly written as Slayground, but The Sour Lemon Score spoke to me in ways not it nor even The Seventh did.

    3. Plunder Squad: I always admire a Parker that tries the “vignette” approach. Not as good as The Outfit’s execution, but still filled with fantastic moments and a chilling example of Parker’s ruthlessness.

    4. Butcher’s Moon: Who doesn’t love a good fireworks show? Dat climax!

    5. Deadly Edge: Lots of good character interactions with Parker and Claire, and a much better execution of “Claire in peril”. Also, killer drugged up hippies.

    6. The Rare Coin Score: A good introduction to Claire and a fantastic main antagonist in Jack French.

    7. The Green Eagle Score: A fun air force heist. Stan Devers is an underrated member of The Parker Heister Club.

    8. The Black Ice Score: No surprise here, but there’s still plenty of high moments.

    And with that, I go off on another Parker break. Hard to believe I’m already at the final era of the series. The ride’s coming to a close and I’m not ready to get off just yet.

    • I’ve mentioned before, my ‘wife’ (she and I never got formally hitched, and what’s the diff, except for purposes of taxation?) was reading the Parkers one by one, as I finished them. So I finally got through Dirty Money, handed it to her, she whizzed through it, and then I had to tell her there weren’t any more, nor would be, ever. She got this very thwarted look in her eyes. Not everybody will respond this way to the series. But to those who do, there is no substitute. You can find other books to enjoy, but never quite the same way. Fortunately, they are also very enjoyable to reread. And re-reread. And re-re-read. And etc.

      Lots of ways to group the books. I like your system, but have my own. Some of them are complete standalones, others have a rough episodic quality, but you can still read them alone and keep up. A plot skein will start, be interrupted, then concluded further on. The final three books of The Final Eight do this in a particularly memorable fashion. I agree the format is a bit more traditional in the later books (they all begin with “When such and such happened, Parker did something”, but he never really stopped changing up. None of them are simple rehashes, so typical of genre franchises. There are things in the Final Eight you just won’t find in the First Sixteen. Which is why the books never get old. He stopped writing them so long because he knew when he did a Stark book, he couldn’t afford to half-ass it. A style this spare doesn’t allow you a lot of mistakes.

      PS: The way to do italics in WordPress without being the blog proprietor is to type ’em’ within carets, and put a backslash in front of the concluding ’em’. If you type the code wrong, I can fix it for you in post.

  10. Greg Tulonen

    Re-reading the novel this week, I lingered on this quote I’d never previously considered. It’s from Buenadella’s reflection on his carefully orchestrated plan to unseat Lozini:

    He had spent nearly three years on the operation, moving very slowly, like a fox testing the ice across a frozen river.

    As we now know, that metaphor (or variations thereof) can be found in a previous Parker novel and a much later one. It’s telling, however, that even in his own private self-assessment, Buenadella is a fox, not a wolf.

    Buenadella may have found the following headline, from a nature magazine I came across, useful for the situation in which he found himself:

    “Do Wolves Eat Foxes? Not Usually, But They Might”

    • Well, there were no wolves in the midwest then, and just the occasional one today. Foxes are abundant just about everywhere, and he probably liked the metaphor better. Since he’s sneaking, not openly hunting, fox works better. But yeah, it might have occurred to Westlake to put that in there just to point out that big canids eat small ones. (Foxes and coyotes still survive better in urban areas than wolves ever will).

      Where did Westlake get the ice metaphor? Well, there are frozen rivers and lakes aplenty in Upstate New York. Maybe he crossed a few. Listening as he went. I did it once myself, in the Bronx. Made it across. Wouldn’t try it now.

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